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Hi, I'm Cristina and I'm a student of psychologist. I would really like to specialize me in the laboral and forense area psychology in the future. I study at the University of Chile. The paradigms of psychology that accompany the speciality are a lot, but I would like to specialize me in psychoanalyst, that is the basis of the clinical therapies. I have thought about many research projects for the future which would help to prevent suicide in university students. In addition to research, I have 5 days of the week free for help to the student more young at they subjects in the career.
I would like to be able to study in the future other careers that move away from my area, and travel to another country, such as music, plastic arts and theater. I am also interested in writing a book that includes all the investigations that I have made, along with some theories that I have raise and I have dedicated myself to validate.

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  1. Unknown29 de octubre de 2018 a las 1:04 p.m.

    Hi, cristina.
    I would change this part "I really likes specialize me in the laboral and forense area psychology in the future", I would write "I would really like to specialize me in the laboral and forense area psychology in the future".
    Also, is this part "like specialize me are psychoanalyst, that are the basis", I would changes that for "speciality are a lot, but I would like to specialize me in psychoanalyst, that is the basis".
    I really like this part "I have 5 days of the week free for help to the student more young at they subjects in the career." I wouldn't change anything.
    In this sentence "music, plastic arts, theater." I would add a "And" before the word theater.
    I think that is this part " includes all my research carried out so far" is not clear enought, why don't you say "That includes all the investigations that I have made".

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Cristina Benz is a student of Psychology at the University of Chile, Santiago. She was born in September at the year 1998. She is in the second year of the career and she finished her first semester with very good marks. She likes so much her career because is a career very interesting. At the school she always has a big number of awards and recognition. Since elementary school until her last year of high school, she won the award for the best student, in fifth grade she won the first place in the Olympics mathematics, in eight grade won the prize for the best marks of school and fourth grade, in high school won the award of “highest honors” for her good marks and good behavior. Cristina likes so much learn languages, in her free time, when she isn’t read some text for the university or watch some episode of F.R.I.E.N.D.S, she learning Italian and Korean. You can reach her at the University in FACSO (faculty of social sciences) in the Avenue Ignacio Carrera Pinto N°1045, Ñuñoa,...
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